This is pretty fun sounding, particularly in the first half or so. You've put a lot of work into your percussion and there's some interesting ideas there. I'd love to hear what you could do if you based your song writing a little more around that. You could look into working more on structure since its a little meandering. Your leads also a little buried behind those drums in the mix. But overall it's quite energetic and lively with plenty of ideas going on.

This is incredibly badass. You constantly keep things fresh and moving while keeping the sound all within the same theme. Very nicely executed and fantastically mixed.

I honestly wouldn't worry too much about the drum volume. If anything I'd recommend sticking a little bit of dotted 1/8th note delay/reverb on them (especially to fill out those cool ass hi-hats panning around) and bringing the ride cymbal down or making it a little more dynamic (a little flat sounding).
For guitars, I totally get what you mean, they need a little extra high mids to bring out the plucking I'm guessing. Also, some compression for extra rhythmic feel would really help glue the track together (mainly on drums, guitar and mix bus).

The levelling of this mix is fantastic. Nothing sticks out other than above (hope it's useful). Awesome tune, great feel. You really captured the theme you were going for. Loving the layered guitar parts and the orchestral sound. Everything fits together really well and there's lovely moving dynamics throughout the tune.